Thieves Prefer Rainy and Windy Days

Jul 18, 2015 22:33
Recently in Japan, there are many rainy and windy days by the approach of typhoon.

We have to be careful about not only the rain and wind but also sneak thieves.

In fact, thieves prefer rainy and windy days.

Because:

・When the break-in, they break window glasses or do picking doors, but the rain and the wind drown these sounds.

・When the weather is bad, people have no room to care about other people.

・When laundries are left out despite the rain, it will inform that residents of the house are absence.

Also, today most thieves seem to use SNS, such as Facebook or Twitter.

If you posted articles something like "I've been on a trip to Hawaii!" you could be targeted by thieves.

Anyway, please be careful.
No. 1　allabitood's correction
  • Thieves Prefer Rainy and Windy Days
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Recently in Japan, there are many rainy and windy days by the approach of typhoon.
  • Recently in Japan, there are many rainy and windy days by because of the approach of the typhoon.
  • We have to be careful about not only the rain and wind but also sneak thieves.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • In fact, thieves prefer rainy and windy days.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Because:
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • ・When the break-in, they break window glasses or do picking doors, but the rain and the wind drown these sounds.
  • ・When they break-in, they break window glasses windowpanes or do picking pick doors, but the rain and the wind drown these sounds.
    　Instead of 'window glasses' you can simply say 'windows', or you can say 'windowpanes'.
  • ・When the weather is bad, people have no room to care about other people.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • ・When laundries are left out despite the rain, it will inform that residents of the house are absence.
  • ・When laundries are the laundry is left out despite the rain, it will inform thieves that the residents of the house are absence absent.
  • Also, today most thieves seem to use SNS, such as Facebook or Twitter.
  • Also, today most thieves seem to use SNS social media, such as Facebook or Twitter.
    　The term 'SNS' is rarely used and only describes text messages.
  • If you posted articles something like "I've been on a trip to Hawaii!" you could be targeted by thieves.
  • If you have posted articles something like "I've been on a trip to Hawaii!" you could be targeted by thieves.
  • Anyway, please be careful.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
This was very well written.
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
I'm happy about your words. :)
No. 2　Sharu's correction
  • Thieves Prefer Rainy and Windy Days
  • Thieves prefer Rainy and Windy days.
  • Recently in Japan, there are many rainy and windy days by the approach of typhoon.
  • Recently in Japan, there are many rainy and windy days because of the typhoon.
  • We have to be careful about not only the rain and wind but also sneak thieves.
  • We have to be careful about not only the rain and wind, but also sneak thieves.
I hope the weather conditions get better ~
kanotown
Thank you very much always for correcting me! :)
I hope so too!
Sharu
No problem ^^
No. 3　Timmy's correction
  • In fact, thieves prefer rainy and windy days.
  • In fact, thieves prefer (to do their dirty work on) rainy and windy days.
  • If you posted articles something like "I've been on a trip to Hawaii!" you could be targeted by thieves.
  • If you have posted something like "Next week I'm going on a trip to Hawaii!" you could be targeted by thieves.
Interesting! ^_^
kanotown
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :D
Timmy
You are welcome!
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